One day it was a glorious day and my Mum and dad went to get  

Ropes

One day it was a glorious day and a man called DJ built a high ropes then he climbed them. It looked cool when he climbed it. When he climbed I looked up at him.

He was wobbling and fe felt scared. He took one more step and his foot fell through the hole between the rungs. He fell. DJs mum was watching him and she screamed "be careful!"

DJ fell because he was being clumsy and he was waving his arms and legs around. Mum put her arms out and she screamed "ahhhhhhhh" and then she caught DJ in her arms. DJ was safe and sound.

tps year 4

One day it was a glorious day and the.

Give was spitting and  she  got away and.

When she got  away she  run fast as she.

Code and then she stopped she wore the

Rest over the way  when she came up to .

A big hose it was so. Big that it was

Like so big that I code slept in their.

And the sun was rising I was so tied

onis came back and then saw me in

their  bid .   I run back home and  got

My passport  and I got a fit  to

Astla and it.

My score is 11

Describing in detail

Today we had to write about a short clip we watched. Our goal was to describe IN DETAIL what we saw. This was just a practice so then when we wrote our own stories, we know how to write in detail and don't forget to leave things out. It helps the reader get a picture in their head, like a movie, of what I am writing.

This is the clip we used.
(Only the first 1 minute - about the boy sleeping through his alarms)



This is what I wrote.

Today the sun was shining on the radio and when the sun shined on the radio it was a great morning and after that the radio turned on and it said good morning when the music turned on this hand shot out and it was a boy and the boy shot it with a BB gun when he shot the clock his phone slid out over his hand.

Do you think I have described what happened in lots of detail?
Please leave me a comment to let me know if I did achieve my goal or not.

week 7

Today we were celebrating for  toinne large wece

And at the toinne large that we were celebrating

Same over the people were talking toinne and when

The people were talking toine when thea were that

Swimming day 2

In swimming we do floating on our back. In my group we did streamline which is when you put your hands together and straighten your hands above your head and kick really hard. Then we learnt how to do strokes which is when you move one arm at a time.